My Onomatopoeia Poem

Adverbs

I am learning to use adverbs in my story.  They tell the reader how something is being done. I used the adverb dangerously.

Using similes

Discribing words.

My lerning intenshen is to use verbs adjectives adverbs.  I am proud for getting this far.  My teacher comes and helps me.  Next I will keep doing this.

Persuasive Writing

I am learning to write persuasive writing.  I am proud of my writing because I thought about tricky words.  It was tricky to think about  some good ideas. 

Using Comic Book on the iPad

I am learning to use Comic Book to publish my story.  I am proud of changing the picture using special effects.  I am proud of working hard on my publishing.  It is tricky to remember to add a full stop.  Ms Baria helped me add the full stops.  I need to work on my punctuation marks, like full stops, question marks and exclamation marks.